Week 15-Diary

This week i filmed another student in my media class giving feedback on my final draft of my magazine. She analysed each page giving them positive comments and also improvements. This was helpful as i could see what someone with knowledge of magazines thought about it and also she fits into my target audience so its a good indication of what people will think of my magazine.

I also completed my second evaluation question which was asking about the social goups represented in the magazine, so i talked about how i have made it specific to the younger demographic as they are my target audience. I also explained how i related it to both females and males and also tried to vary the content so i widen my target audience as much as possible.

Feedback

I recieved some feedback from a peer in my class and they gave me positives and negatives for each page on my magazine. This was useful because i got a second opinion on my designs and also the opinion from someone in my target audience.

Week 14- Diary

Magazine comments

Once i had completed my final draft of the magazine, i asked people to give their opinions on it and write me positive and negative comments so i know what i need to improve on each page.

Week 13- Diary

This week i started my first evaluation question which was asking me to explain the features i included in my magazine that can be found in other similar magazines already published. I why i kept to some of the steretypical rules and didnt to some of the others to make my magazine unique. However, some features such as the barcode and website name are vital and therefore i made sure i included them. But i did make it my own my using unusual camera shots that wouldnt necessarily be used in other magazines to vary the page layout and the overall look of the magazine. I hope this will make it stand out from other similar magazines and make it appeal more to my target audience.